Into the halls of WRMS a million times. On planes to different continents. Toward the rain and off into the sunsets, goes my shoes that are two sizes smaller for me but I insist I wear them.
The small patches of white and blue paint on the bottom from art class last year. And the bright red laces worn out. With a shimmery bandanna pattern on the side. And the inside, as plushy as could be.
Upon the hills of grass, and valleys of dirt, my shoes still hang in there without a doubt. Soon enough they will give up and start giving me blisters. But all I have to do is wear band aids on my heels.
Regarding any other shoe, I would choose my one-of-a-kind Sperry Top Siders for all my adventures to come.
I like the series of prepositional phrases to open this, taking us to the places your shoes have taken you. I also like it that you tell us what kind of shoes they are at the very end. Well done!
I like how you took us through where your shoes have been. I would also always choose my Sperry Top Siders too. I feel that they are comfy just like you do too.
I really liked your voice and it made me feel like I was wearing the sperry at that time
I really liked how I could picture everything you were saying in my mind. I liked how you used vivid imagery and it helped me understand the story better.